When I read the first three chapters I felt like John Stienbeck gave a lot of detail to give the story a little wider picture. He wouldn't just write" There was a pearl in the oyster's mouth. " He wanted to emphasize what the pearl was like with the senses. He explained that Kino dug in the oyster muscle and described what it felt like. There is one problem I have with his writing, he mostly writes about the sight and feel of the object and not enough taste, hear, smell.
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